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A Non-Freaked Out, Focused Approach to the Common Core — Part 2 — Complex Texts

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Should students be required to read texts chosen by the teacher?

Recently, I posted an overview of the non-freaked out approach to the Common Core that I’ve been experimenting with in my ninth grade world history and comp/lit (ELA) classes during the last year and a half or so. In this post (Part 2), I’m going to dive into the what, why, and how of getting students to read, appreciate, and grow through grade-appropriate complex texts.

What are complex texts and why do they matter?

If you’ve been hearing “complex text” phraseology thrown around like crazy lately, it’s because one of the central shifts that the Common Core promotes is the idea that, instead of only giving students books that are within their zone of proximal development (“just right” books), we should be asking students to read texts that are appropriately complex for their age.

(Check this out if you’re wondering how “complexity” is defined by the Common Core.)

This doesn’t mean the CCSS are opposed to things like choice reading or book love; rather, it stems from one of the central arguments in the research appendix (namely, that the average complexity of assigned reading in high school has been decreasing over the years, while the average complexity of required reading in college/career settings has been increasing).

Now, there’s more than one way to tackle this Common Core shift. In this post, I’ll primarily be sharing the approach I’ve chosen, but I’ll end by addressing some common questions and an alternative approach that I learned of recently during a PD led by Penny Kittle. Read the rest of this entry »

Common Core R.CCR.6 Explained

R.CCR.6–that’s the sixth College/Career Readiness anchor standard within the Reading strand of the Common Core State Standards (CCSS) for ELA / Literacy–reads as follows:

Assess how point of view or purpose shapes the content and style of a text.

In other words, how does where a writer or narrator is coming from (point of view) and going towards (purpose) affect what he/she writes (content and style)?

How does point of view shape a text?

Point of view–or, where the text is coming from–is worth time in the classroom if the time goes beyond teaching point of view as just another lit term. Asking students to identify whether A Separate Peace is written in first-person or third-person point of view is mundane; questions like these don’t answer a “So what?” What if point of view related questions looked more like these?

  • In Knowles’ A Separate Peace, an adult Gene tells of his years at Devon. Yet, considering Gene’s deep involvement in the story’s key conflict, is Gene a reliable narrator? Give evidence to support your answer.
  • In Remarque’s All Quiet on the Western Front, there is a sudden shift between the narrator’s point of view in Chapter 12 and in the two-paragraph epilogue that ends the book. What does this shift mean? Is this shift an effective way to end the novel, in your opinion?
  • In Sallinger’s Catcher in the Rye, what problems does Holden Caufield’s narration present to the reader? How does Holden’s narration contribute to the style of the novel.

Questions like these provide a critical way for approaching point of view, and students 6-12 are ready to engage in this type of thinking with the proper scaffolding. Kids want to do more than identify whether a story is first- or third-person; they want to analyze, discuss, and argue about the complex issues that point of view brings up. This is what R.CCR.6 is getting at.

While point of view in literature provides one stream of interesting material, it provides even greater opportunity for discussion when considering informational texts.

Point of view and purpose in informational texts

Whether reading informational texts in the ELA classroom, analyzing documents in history class, or reading articles in a science class, understanding the interconnectedness of point of view and purpose are integral for R.CCR.6 and for life as an intelligent adult.

For example, let’s consider a series of documents in The Human Record: Sources of Global History since 1500, by Andrea Overfield:

  1. “Agreement between Charles D. Rudd, et al., and Lobengula, King of Matabeleland, 1891,” (308-309)
  2. “Letter of King Lobengula to Queen Victoria,” (309)
  3. “George Washington Williams, Open Letter to King Leopold II of Belgium, 1890,” (310-312)
  4. “King Leopold II, Open Letter to the Officials of the Congo Free State, 1897,” (313-314)
  5. “Ndansi Kumalo, His Story, Reflections of an African Warrior,” (315-317)*

Simple questions will get students ready to consider point of view, purpose, and these five documents as a unified whole:

  • Who wrote this? How do you know?
  • What was the purpose of this document? How do you know?
  • E.g., In Document 2, the purpose is seek justice for the deception of Document #1. King Lobengula is informing Rudd’s Queen of the deceptive conditions under which Lobengula signed Rudd’s “agreement”
  • How do point of view and purpose shape the style of each of these documents?
  • E.g., Williams is writing to his friend, who also happens to be a powerful king, but he is extremely disillusioned by the difference between Leopold’s claims about the Congo and what actually is happening there; thus, his style is fascinating: he is both humble and bold, repeatedly calling Leopold “your majesty” but also brutally honest about the despicable conditions in the Belgian Congo.
These types of questions are great fodder for both discussion and writing. They beg the use of textual evidence, which could tie into two of the “Six Shifts” (“Text-based Answers” and “Writing from Sources”). As is often the case, once you get an overall grasp of the standards you will find that you’re hitting a lot of the specific standards without even knowing it.

*These primary source documents would allow for interesting study in a world history unit on imperialism, but they also provide excellent framing for an ELA classroom preparing to read Achebe’s Things Fall Apart.

Common Core R.CCR.5 Explained

R.CCR.5–that’s the fifth College/Career Readiness anchor standard within the Reading strand of the Common Core State Standards (CCSS) for ELA / Literacy–reads as follows:

Analyze the structure of texts, including how specific sentences, paragraphs, and larger portions of the text (e.g., a section, chapter, scene, or stanza) relate to each other and the whole.

There’s a lot of ways to implement this standard; for my brain, it helps to think of this in terms of questions I can ask to get kids thinking about how structural features affect the meaning of different kinds of texts.

1. Novels

One of my favorite novels of the past school year was All Quiet on the Western Front; I love the book for many reasons, but one of them is Remarque‘s inclusion of striking scenes that are at first awkward and then profound.*

 

In one of the novel’s early scenes, we find protagonist Paul sitting in a meadow with a couple of his comrades-in-arms. Everything is pleasant about the scene–they are sitting in a circle, playing cards, laughing, talking–except for one jarring detail: they are sitting on boxes with holes in the tops with their pants around their ankles. As we closely read this passage in class, I enjoy watching my students’ faces as, one after another, it dawns on them that these men are sitting in a circle together while defecating.

Once we get through with the scene, I begin to ask my students some questions:

  • Knowing that Remarque wrote this novel “to tell about men destroyed by war,” why might this scene merit inclusion in this novel?
  • Is this scene vulgar? Why or why not?

I give them a chance to propose hypotheses in pairs, and then we will go back into the scene, pencils in hands, and closely read it again with our questions as a focus. I will remind students that, in order to understand how this scene relates to the novel as a whole, we’ll have to look not just at what the scene says, but also what it hints at and what it doesn’t explicitly say. In teacherspeak, we’ll need to infer.

When we closely read the scene for the second time, students will notice that this isn’t such a pleasant scene after all: there are references to the nearby front, to badly wounded Kemmerich, to Paul and his friends having moments where there’s nothing they can say. After we’re finished, I have students ask three questions that they’re curious about (curiosity is a character strength that I explicitly teach students), and a big one that I’m hoping to see connects back to R.CCR.5: What on earth could have made these once civilized students into callous, crude, I-seem-to-care-more-about-getting-double-rations-than-I-do-the-deaths-of-half-my-company young men?

Through asking the right questions, students be led to discover that this scene is not flippant, but rather that it hints at the theme of the book: World War I was unlike anything humanity had ever seen; it devastated the men in death and life. Furthermore, this scene builds suspense at the start of the novel. It makes readers want to know what incurred such psychological damage on Paul and his friends.

2. Articles, Columns

Let’s take a look at a columnist who can usually be counted on to write cogent, passionate arguments every week for the Miami Herald: Leonard Pitts Jr. Whether you agree with his views or not, his argumentative writing hits on a variety of topics (a recent piece would be perfect for starting a CCSS Literacy-style debate in a  health or government class) and it does a lot of work in a short space. Many, if not all, of the CCSS reading anchor standards could be taught using the work of columnists such as Pitts.

For the purposes of this discussion, let’s look at Pitt’s piece on “the stupid giant.” I haven’t read this text with students yet, but I will be doing so in the fall for the sake of increasing student awareness of our need to drink deeply from a variety of complex texts.

In the “Stupid Giant,” Pitts makes an argument, but his structure is a far cry from the standard five- or -six-paragraph essay that I teach students to write in timed writing situations. One way to tackle this text could be by asking students to answer these questions after an initial reading:

  • What is Pitts’ argument?
  • If you had to choose one part of this column where Pitts summarizes his argument, where would it be? In other words, what acts as a thesis statement? (Students could argue that it’s the title or that it is contained in other parts of the column.)
  • Where does Pitts address people who might be prone to disagree with him? How does he respectfully address what Graff, Birkenstein, and Durst call his “naysayers”?
  • How does Pitts give this piece a sense of beginning and closing? In other words, which parts of the column act like an intro and a conclusion?
  • What does x sentence do for the piece as a whole? How does x reference contribute to Pitts’ argument?
These questions get after R.CCR.5, and, as a side note, this text lends itself to an incredible debate: Is America a stupid giant?

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3. Poems

Similar to articles and columns, poems are a great medium for teaching about text structure. Some potential questions:

  • How does this stanza relate to those before and after it?
  • What does this recurring line do for the poem’s theme?

My primary goal in teaching poetry is not to mold my students into future English majors, but rather to equip them with the ability to see the impact that structure has on a text. Poems can help with that.

4. Primary Source Documents

If you’re in history classroom where students are required to do the primary-source-reading work of historians, students can look at the structure in a different way: structure can help them determine what kind of a document they are reading. Is this an advertisement? A comic? A political cartoon? An argument? A legal document? Ask students to figure these things out for themselves, in part by using the structure of the document itself.

As with many of the reading anchor standards of the CCSS, R.CCR.5 can be taught by providing students with complex texts, redundant literacy instruction, and well-designed questions.

* I taught the book to freshmen–a perfect audience for awkward moments.

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